Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Others
believe that governments should take care of it.
Helath is wealth therefore, some people tend to believe that we personally responsible for our better healthy lifestye. While other say that administration should take care of civilions. it arguable debate and i think both are equally take steps for this.
To start it with every individuals duties on regarding of their own sfety of health. First of all we all are owner of our body thus it is advisable that peroson should be aware of his or her obesity and mental problems and it is effective to cure personal being good in health.secondly parent and tutor can encorage and motivat pupile for regular excir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Helath is wealth therefore, some people tend to believe that we pers...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nsible for our better healthy lifestye. While other say that administration should ta...
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Suggestion: It
...stration should take care of civilions. it arguable debate and i think both are eq...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re of civilions. it arguable debate and i think both are equally take steps for t...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ble debate and i think both are equally take steps for this. To start it with ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 506.0 1615.20841683 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81904761905 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70941919624 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 176.041082164 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.752380952381 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 506.74238477 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.524830354 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.8 7.06120827912 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26374582647 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132470226123 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479947605924 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189022776917 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708153292668 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.