News editors decide what to dobroadcast on television and what to print in newspaper.What factors do you think influence these decision ? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
In recent years, television and newspaper play a major role in day-to-day life and editors are the only responsible ones for what to telecast in the media or to print in a newspaper. most of the people might be influenced by bad news while some people interested in the good news. I think it depends on the person to what extent it is necessary to consider the news that has trolled in the media.
Editors are the more responsible persons to decide whether the news has to telecast on tv or in the newspaper. People prefer to read the newspaper only once in a day but television is the one who prefers to see most of the time. In that case, the newspaper is the better one to choose for reporting the bad news that influences many people around us and better not to repeat it on the broadcast. For example, these days students are more sensitive than they were before and reacting for nonsense things and are attempting suicide for just not getting up to mark in their studies. Media is repeating the same for several times and the innocent children are reacting to that when they feel depressed.
I feel that trolling the good news or innovative news creates more impact on the people and helps them to educate more about the things going on around. Reporters should present the news in a way that people are more attracted by their views and ideas. Meanwhile, most of the people watch the news in smartphones when they feel free and update them to current affairs.
In my opinion, I feel that reporters will take beforehand of what to telecast in the media and newspapers before it influenced by the people and the presentations and debates make a definite change in the current generation.
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- News editors decide what to dobroadcast on television and what to print in newspaper.What factors do you think influence these decision ? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, as to, for example, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60526315789 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5150430378 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476973684211 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9247850205 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293613363802 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120081659075 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07525556032 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183606584108 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838788757038 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.