Many museums and historical sites are mostly visited by foreign tourists , but not local people. Why do you think it happens? What can be done to attract local visitors to these sites?
Historical places and museums are sources of attraction mostly for international visitors; however, native people pay no visit to these places. The lack of new sources of attraction and high entry charges are the reasons behind the little interest of local people for these sites. Some measures need to be taken at individual and government level to encourage local people to visit cultural sites.
To begin with, there are plethora of reasons for the less interest of local people in visiting museums and historical places. Firstly, people feel bore while visiting such places. In other words, natives are mostly familiar with the culture and history of the historical buildings, visiting the same sites are considered as waste of time by them. Moreover, the traditional artworks in museums is admired by tourists only, the repetitive visits of natives to these places generate feeling of boredom. Secondly, the museums and historical sites charge high entry fees for every visit, this discourage the local visitors to spend money on already visited places. For instance, a famous cultural site named 'Sada Pind' in Amritsar charges Rs.1000 for every single visitor, the natives avoid spending this much amount on every visit.
There are some possible solutions that can be taken by authorities and individuals to generate interest among people for historical places and museums. Primarily, to make the places more attractive for local people cultural events,exhibitions and animated shows should be organised. For instance, in the famous temple 'Akshardham' , laser show is filmed that describes different religious stories on daily basis, this inculcates the curiosity and encourages people to visit the place. Next, there should be reduction in entry charges for the native people for some specific days, this will encourage people to visit these places. Also, students should be assigned some research work related to history and culture, this will motivate students and their parents to visit the historical places and collect some useful information.
To conclude, it can be stated that local visitors offer less interest in visiting historical places and museums, as they do not gather any new information from these places. To make these places more attractive interesting events needs to be organised and free entry passes should be given to native people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37365591398 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60443862967 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494623655914 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3466054307 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9375 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275765164094 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111956295938 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580607712121 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196525911509 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541150864559 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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