Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. What is your opinions?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Some people think that we should forbid smoking totally. Although smoking indeed is harmful to our health and environment, I still think we should not ban it completely because of the following reasons.
Firstly, it is clear that everyone has his own hobbies and others should respect them. Smoking to somebody is a great joy which the anti-smokers can hardly understand. I have chance to talk with several colleagues who are regular smokers. They all admitted that smoking did help them to release a great deal of stress and in some cases, it inspired them with some innovative ideas in work. Recently, the rules applied to restrict the smoking areas have become more and more strict. Smokers are not be able to smoke everywhere especially in public areas without the risk of getting penalty. Therefore, smoking will not effect the surrounding people as it used to be.
Secondly,by this way or other way, we have to admit that tobacco industry also plays an important role in the economy. It contributes in the GDP growth, especially for the developing countries whose agriculture still occupy a big part of the economy. The manufacturers of cigarettes contribute a large amount of tax to government as well. In addition, in order to produce cigarettes, the industry will need a great number of laborers for planting the cigarette trees, working in the processing factories..etc. In term of social view, it will help to create more job opportunities for the population.
Finally, despite some negative effects of smoking, I still support to maintain smoking but suggest that government should monitor the smoker community closely and strictly. Thus, smoking will not effect the people around who say no to smoking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ng penalty. Therefore, smoking will not effect the surrounding people as it used to be...
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Suggestion: , by
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10954063604 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77686361641 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9539092972 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132040071563 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447626074908 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371041220349 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822485715875 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343369571244 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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