On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the mamager of your insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m writing you with regard to a claim on a valuable wristwatch that I have lost during my holiday to London. I have purchased a travel insurance policy bearing no: 456 UK on 20th of May 2019 from your organization before I leave to London, which provides a cover for any item lost.
The wristwatch brand was ‘Rolex’ and it was a silver colour gent’s wristwatch with blue colour dial. I have lost it during the visit to Yorkshire, by train. As I remember, I have removed it in the rest room at a railway station which is situated between Yorkshire and Cardiff.
Therefore, I would like to claim for the loss I incurred by the misplacement of my wristwatch. I have attached herewith the copy of the complain that I have made in the Yorkshire Police Station on the loss of my wristwatch and a copy of my insurance policy together with the copy of the receipt of my wristwatch from ‘Walmart Stores’ in New Hampshire.
I appreciate your kind consideration on this regard at your earliest, since I need to purchase a new wristwatch soon.
Thank You
Yours faithfully,
K.C.K Peiris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...h. I have attached herewith the copy of the complain that I have made in the Yorkshire Polic...
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Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...n. Thank You Yours faithfully, K.C.K Peiris
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83673469388 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03452643541 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1682305433 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205308260553 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987439349818 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867983432969 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117103831455 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113424118618 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.