What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural area? What the problems of living n rural area and how it can be solved?
Surely there has been no time in history where lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals it is beneficial to live in big cities, as opposed to rural area has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. Regarding this I would say, it is happening mainly due to our government’s bad system and can be solved by the solution discussed in the essay.
To commence with, it is beneficial to live in cities because in cities there are all facilities for human need. In cities there are proper medical facilities for everyone. There are ultra modernized hospitals and doctors are always available. Most of the people are educated and there is standard of living. In cities there are best education facilities for students and advanced education system. Jobs are available and many people move to big cities for good earning.
Probing further, rural areas are not fully developed and there are no facilities for human life. There are no proper medical facilities, hospitals are not good not and there is no doctor for treatment. Roads are not cemented and also there is no proper municipal work. In rural areas education system is not good and modern. There is no jobs opportunities, no good earning and there is no standard of living.
In conclusion, I would say rural areas can also be developed if government can do something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
... is standard of living. In cities there are best education facilities for students and a...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...e is no proper municipal work. In rural areas education system is not good and modern...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are no jobs'?
Suggestion: There are no jobs
...ducation system is not good and modern. There is no jobs opportunities, no good earning and ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.5418719212 237% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91983122363 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80404430404 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497890295359 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3003955944 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7333333333 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.25397266985 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215145369423 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719623055567 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922066773579 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154174365314 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950076921026 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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