Now days, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss
people are spending long working hours in the office ; consequently, their personal life is affected negatively. it can generate a lot of disscussion. This essay eill discuss its cause and effects, moreever, will recommend few corrective steps also.
Firstly, excessive work pressure in today’s corpraye culture requires extra hours to complete the assignment on schedule. Apart from that, advancement of the artifical intellegence and robotics have added the pressure of job insecurities. therefore, the workers and always under pressure to preform at aptimum levels to stay relevant
Moving further, lomg working schedule not only affects physical and psychological health negativety ,it has a negative impact on personal life also . consequently , more families are separating than ever before because the couple does not have enough time to spend together to keep the bonmd alive and people are falling sick more frequently. employees health and performance is the backbone of the success of any organization, therefore ,the management should review human resource policies and implement to have better work-life management. Additionally, companiescan implement shift model with limited working hours so that employee can handover pending work to the employee in next shifi
In conclusion,in my opinion, the excesssive work pressure has affected both peace in personal life and efficiency in professional life, therefore , organisation should review their policices and rectify accordingl.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86757990868 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05411125665 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712328767123 0.580463131201 123% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.1954445729 50.4703680194 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.777777778 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237562133998 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832783047302 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686829113402 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128177868959 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465479053652 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 53.1260098522 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 11.5310837438 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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