Today, the economical gap between the rich and poor is widening. What do you believe are the reasons for this? What can be done to prevent this from happening?
Now-a-days, there is a huge economical gap in between public like some are rice and other are poor is extending. According to my perspective, it happens by the various causes like differece in the salary and the unemployment. So, this problems can be solved with the synergy of both public and the government. This essay will be discused in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with the obstacle, firstly, the unemployment is a major issue for many countries that's why the poor people can not send their childern to school and their kids donot get a change to do study due to the expenditure of the schools. For example, researches show that in India several people who live underpoverty line and they do not send their minors to school and then by the lack of education they cannot get good jobs by end they fail to rise up. Moreover, the salary is the different of every person then the juniors cannot compair with the siniors.
In the solutions, first and formost, the government should provide a good and better education to the public so that they can also get a way to earn hand some money. For instance, a person who is poor but he learnt in good institute then any one cannot stop him to do job. Furthermore, the assositation should make a rule to earn equal money in a company a manager. Hence, this can help to make a equal public.
To sum up with, the discrimination between rich and poor is rising however, it can be reduced by the steps of government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58712121212 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66397236047 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549242424242 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0765226177 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201024799422 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761799356446 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543466946668 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129137980841 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552244975208 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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