Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. Do you agree or disagree?
Each year and day the world is changing, even schools are following these changes and assisting their young people by teaching them about health and how to deal with it. Some people agree that schools do not do enough to teach their students about health, others disagree with this point.
On one hand, some people say, schools do not teach and help young people about health properly and enough. First, schools are not well equipped with a trained team and equipment's, that can aid to teach students. Second, teachers role is only giving their lessons and move forward, without helping or training the students with any health problem. However, several schools building need renovation since are still old and must be fully equipped with hygiene items and trained team for assisting the young people. For example, some say that public schools in Lebanon, do not teach enough about health because teachers are not trained well, due to lack in administration. In my opinion, I disagree, since most schools these days are doing their best in teaching about health, through training their teachers or from out sources such as NGOs.
On the other hand, some people disagree and believe that schools are doing their best, by teaching about health. First, most schools these days have their own nurse department with special and trained team. Second, each health issue or disease, schools announce parents and students about it, by sending flyers, sms or emails. Moreover, each two or three month, parents and students are invited for health orientations, teach them how to deal with each situation. However, schools offer their students the opportunity to receive first aid training from medical teams and teach them how to act with. For example, when I was at school, we had a meeting and training with the Red Cross about accidents during school hours. From my side, I agree since all schools should continue to teach their students about health.
In conclusion, some people agree and disagree that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. In my opinion, schools are developed and trying to offer a health environment for their students, by teaching them about health, hygiene and there side effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... or emails. Moreover, each two or three month, parents and students are invited for h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0352303523 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26735838918 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8133280956 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490155101271 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231257094041 0.084324248473 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.250221375225 0.0667982634062 375% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.435575486737 0.151304729494 288% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128812741277 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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