You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain -
why you are selling the television
describe the television
suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Hello John,
I hope you are going great. Its been a long time we haven't met, I remember the last time we grouped together on the Reena's birthday. I am writing this letter to inform you that my Sony Bravura(TYHUI89) model is on sale and thought you were interested in buying it.
My parents are gifting to me a new smart Samsung TV which will be delivered on next weekend. My old TV has a 4K LED screen and pre-installed with Andriod OS( lastes version pie 8.0). You can also enable the internet, therefore, you can access youtube, netflix, and etc. which will make you comfortable to watch the web series with your family. I know that your existing digital box given you an obnoxious experience and this is the right opportunity to buy a second-hand TV in immaculate condition. I am selling it a resonable price i.e Rs. 54000 but the actual price is Rs.89,000 and it is 3 years old.
If you are interested, would it be possible for you to come and pick up it this Friday? I am in no hurry to get the payment in the first place. Please let me know if you need further information.
I am waiting for your response. Will see you soon!
Thankyou
Apoorva Chikara
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| 2019-06-12 | Apoorva Chikara | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-12 | Apoorva Chikara | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...re going great. Its been a long time we havent met, I remember the last time we groupe...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...efore, you can access youtube, netflix, and etc. which will make you comfortable to watc...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44651162791 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61171798805 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6893276853 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5384615385 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303156941967 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10150422395 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687145539766 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189817508965 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436381258199 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.