While parking his car in the lane outside your home, a neighbour has caused some damage to your car. You have decided to write to this neighbour.
Write a letter to him/her. In the letter:
– say why you are writing
– describe the damage caused to your car
– say how you feel about this problem and suggest what actions he/she should take about it.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. John,
I have noticed in the evening that there are few damages on my car, that is parked just outside my main gate. On checking CCTV footage, I have come know that your wife hit my car, while parking your car. That’s why I am writing to you to bring to your notice about the incident, and I hope till now you are informed!
Side mirror of the right side is fully damaged, while there are long scratches from front door till the back door. After consulting with workshop, they informed that everything would be covered in insurance. However, a processing fee of Rs. 1000 is to be paid against the insurance claim.
Initially, I was upset and angry as well after look at my car. But, form the CCTV footage, it was cleared that your wife was a beginner, and she was very much scared. Tell you wife that she no need to get upset, as I understand her situation. However, I would be glad if you pay the processing fee. You can transfer the amount via “Google Pay”, which may give you cashback.
Yours sincerely,
Bibhu Kalita
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-12 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-12 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5497382199 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40981063633 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7701024796 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269280606389 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896439087254 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801729521077 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165577289956 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147593792475 0.0580467560999 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.