Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.what do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in arts.
art indicates the glory of our history and it is reflect all verious culture and societies of the glob. but in this modern time more and more focus subjects such as science, technology and business and therfore, popularity of art seems declined.
Reasons for less popularity of art in new genration. First of all, owing to employement demand in fields of technology, science and business most people interested in these type of career option which gives them better opportunity to earn higher and to settle down easily in their life. Moreover, they found art needed high visuality and creative ideas which are realy difficult to expose for every one. secondly, there are lesser schools and university who provide perfact and efficient knowledge about this flamboyant art and at present there are low cahnces of placement in any industries or in getting job. Additionally, new world is on peak of development which required mass of people in diffrent fields thus there is scarcity of individuls in art subject. Thirdly, it have been seen that in many nation artist disrespect and it would lead them demotivated and unemployed. For instance, Mr Akshay is painter who reveal orthodox rules and regulation of politics by painting but unfortunately artist is banned for those type of art.
However undoubtly, there are paramount of solutions which should be taken to encourage youth population and can divert to imagination world. Firstly, administration rebuild tersiry and schools for better education. For example Ahmedabad, art college. Forthermore, child innovative ideas and thinking for art would be best way to earn afluent reimbursement. secondly, artist must be respected in any corner of world, to given example, one of great god of art lionardo da winchi. Finally, in encouragement of creation they should be rewarded for their best conduct etc are solution for this world problem.
In conclusion art shows the human revaluation and it is the mirror of cultures thus, new geration should be motivate for this charming work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18237082067 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80421782739 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5552198533 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205091881057 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069101794024 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386905667706 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132727163088 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400020901478 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.