Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition. This offer should b granted and it will increase the opportunity to increase the rate of the education cause for that offer more student will try hard to join the university and go with their study further.
As the education is the backbone of a nation the more the people educated the more the nation progress increased.Many student do well in the secondary school and try hard for the university and after they got admit who is low on finance dropped out the university.If the Government offer such kind of opportunity that to free the university for whom are really not capable of affording the tuition fee it will increase the confidentiality among the people for education and more people will be eager to admit in university.Beside that
if this offer get done the competition to do well in the education and research will increased cause more the scholar the more the opportunities.
Some may tell that if the tuition fee set free, some student who are capable of it will try to show them as not capable but as the issue created by the government, it can properly investigate and give this opportunity to the proper student.And another fact raised that the university can raise their tuition fee for who are capable of, but it can avoided by fixing a tuition fee for university by government.Some may also arise the question why shouldn't the offer is for only the meritorious student who are certain to capable of finished th university but it can cleared that if the opportunity is given all whom needed then more will have a way to make their education path long.
So to improve the eagerness of studies in people and make more highly educated person in the nation the government should take this offer without a doubt.
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- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ersity and go with their study further. As the education is the backbone of a nati...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
... the more the nation progress increased.Many student do well in the secondary school...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many students'.
Suggestion: Many students
... the more the nation progress increased.Many student do well in the secondary school and try...
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Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...w on finance dropped out the university.If the Government offer such kind of oppor...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beside
...le will be eager to admit in university.Beside that if this offer get done the compet...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...well in the education and research will increased cause more the scholar the more the opp...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'tells'.
Suggestion: tells
...r the more the opportunities. Some may tell that if the tuition fee set free, some ...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... this opportunity to the proper student.And another fact raised that the university...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'avoid'
Suggestion: avoid
... fee for who are capable of, but it can avoided by fixing a tuition fee for university ...
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Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...uition fee for university by government.Some may also arise the question why shouldn...
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Line 4, column 445, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...nt.Some may also arise the question why shouldnt the offer is for only the meritorious s...
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Line 4, column 564, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'clear'
Suggestion: clear
...le of finished th university but it can cleared that if the opportunity is given all wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, second, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75076923077 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80473648416 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433846153846 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 23.0359550562 282% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.853973772 60.3974514979 420% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 308.8 118.986275619 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 23.4991977007 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.21951772744 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466482422362 0.243740707755 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.361775506166 0.0831039109588 435% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.32306789203 0.0758088955206 426% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271933456581 0.150359130593 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202646020283 0.0667264976115 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 14.1392134831 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 48.8420337079 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 12.1743820225 235% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 11.2143820225 250% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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