The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport City centre from 2003 - 2012.
Summarise and information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows data on three particular criminal spheres in Newport city centre between 2003 to 2012.
Overall, burglary showed a downward trend, while the quantities of car theft and robbery cases relatively fluctuated, in which stealing automobile was the most commonly-committed offence and robbery was the least one.
At the start of the period, there was a sharp contrast in the numbers of crimes. Particularly, criminal cases regarding burglary and car theft showed the highest figures standing at around 3,400 and 2,800 respectively, as opposed to that of robbery with only approximately 600 incidents. Then, the crime rates in burglaries peaked in 2004 at 3,750 cases before reaching the lowest point four years later at 1,100 incidents and ended the period as the second least common illegal action.
On the other hand, the figures for stealing cars reduced to over 2000 cases in 2006 but gradually rose several years later, while those of robberies demonstrated a slight fluctuation. At the end of the period, robbery was by far the most highly-committed crime achieving about 2,750 cases, while robbery still remained as the least common criminal offence with only around 600 incidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...offence with only around 600 incidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, second, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30569948187 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80951352815 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1621859368 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696843855808 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043948991106 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763713743542 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713733560058 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915688737679 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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