Many people associate money with happiness and think that more money one has,the happier they should be. do you agree or disagree?
It is deemed that money and happiness are directly inter-connected and the more money people have, the happier they are. I partially agree with this statement because though lots of things can be procured by having money, health and relationship cannot be brought.
To commence with, people reckon that if a person is financially strong then one must be living a delightful life. This is because money facilitates them to purchase various goods and services which make them happy. As a result, people will fulfil their daily needs as well as dreams when they are opulent. For example, a milliner lives in a luxurious house and drives supercars that are unimaginable for poor people to afford. However, I think that apart from money, there are other factors that are equally important for living a happy life.
On the other hand, physical fitness plays a pivotal role in anyone's life because health cannot be brought with the help of money. In spite of having tremendous money, if a person suffers from severe disease such as, cancer or HIV then one cannot enjoy life at its fullest. In addition to that, family also matters when we consider happiness because as a human we are social animal and we need someone to share our joy. In the absence of relatives and friends, a person might feel depressed or lonely. Therefore, an equal part is played by these factors for the measurement happiness.
To recapitulate, although tangible items and dreams can be achieved with the assistance of money, I bolster the notion of a healthy life and kinship when there is a discussion of happy life. Furthermore, it is recommended that people should give priority to their health and relations rather than only focusing on earning money for better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91554054054 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5705330492 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1730410916 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295194008958 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990530065027 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836922028324 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196123822729 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085414742475 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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