Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the modern era women are poor self independent as compare to past. Now the current time there is no difference in men and women. They can manage their professional and personal life. I am completely agree with this in running time both needs to understand each other equally and complete their works. In this essay, I would like to accord with the given statement.
To begin with, Female when come back from working place feel tired and depressed as they also have to look after the children and prepare dinner for all family members. In this way, the women felt restless and do not concentrate on the house chores and working place. To exemplify , the people of Canada and united states work cooperatively and complete all house related activity in shorter period and spend quality of time with each other.
furthermore, women do not go to jobs for their own , they go for earning and fulfill the needs of their families. If the both can work their living standards would be good. if they have to work in-house for longer hours it would be complete injustice . Might be feel bored from daily life and may felt ill also due to lack of proper rest . For example country like India Nepal there are so many rural places where people thought is women have not to right to go out for work and they needs to take care of home and kids. which is wrong approach.
To recapitulate, I am completely agree that the both genders should have to work collaboratively for the smooth running of life. women work full-time job, men, in their turn, should actively participate in household life performing those tasks that demand man’s qualities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...onal and personal life. I am completely agree with this in running time both needs to...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e chores and working place. To exemplify , the people of Canada and united states ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...end quality of time with each other. furthermore, women do not go to jobs for their own ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e, women do not go to jobs for their own , they go for earning and fulfill the nee...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd fulfill the needs of their families. If the both can work their living standard...
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Suggestion: If
...k their living standards would be good. if they have to work in-house for longer h...
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Suggestion: .
...ger hours it would be complete injustice . Might be feel bored from daily life an...
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Suggestion:
...s it would be complete injustice . Might be feel bored from daily life and may fe...
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Suggestion: .
...felt ill also due to lack of proper rest . For example country like India Nepal th...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...ot to right to go out for work and they needs to take care of home and kids. which is...
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Suggestion: Which
...ey needs to take care of home and kids. which is wrong approach. To recapitulate,...
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey needs to take care of home and kids. which is wrong approach. To recapitulate,...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...h. To recapitulate, I am completely agree that the both genders should have to wo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Women
...atively for the smooth running of life. women work full-time job, men, in their turn,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, for example, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7212543554 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42473895629 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1589898476 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201393175292 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688894724133 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572500333259 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135204800846 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456019201355 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.