There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.
Write a letter to you manage. In your letter:
descibe the complaints that have been made
say why the reception area is important
suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Mr. Will,
I am writing this letter to give a few suggestions to enhance the reception area of our organization. When checked on the administration portal, I was able to see many complaints already registered and there were no descriptive updates on them.
The list of problems comprises some issues which should be taken care immediately such as sitting arrangements, painting at the entrance and fountains are incapacitated. Furthermore, lightning seems less vibrant and should be replaced with natural lighting. The reception is the first place where our client visits and see the records of our eminent clients which should set a lasting impression on the client. Also, It provides room for people to read the newspaper and waiting area for an outsider.
I would like to suggest to move the Table tennis room from the reception area because employees make an incessantly loud noise which hampers the concentration for those waiting for interviews. Apart from it, make the reception podium full of photos clicked with distinct clients which will make this place more exciting for newcomers.
I am hoping that you would like my suggestions.
Your's Sincerely
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest moving'.
Suggestion: suggest moving
...rea for an outsider. I would like to suggest to move the Table tennis room from the receptio...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons. Yours Sincerely Apoorva Chikara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2722513089 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87732419882 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680628272251 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5661174594 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162180935198 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604306125835 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422667308898 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830604338314 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349634887265 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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