You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
I am writing to city evening college in reference to an advertisement I saw in The Guardian on June 15th for a language teacher you looking for.
I am interested in teaching Hindi language and Indian cookery. I have seen that in your last term syllabus these courses were not included. As you are aware, there are now many Indians origin people residing in this part of the city who keen to learn more about their language and culture.
I have a Master's degree in Human resource management additionally diploma in teaching. I hold a special qualification in teaching moreover done bachelors in education. I was a language professor in Canada for 4 years but moved to U.K London in 2010. There I taught the Hindi language to beginners and cookery classes at two community colleges. It gave them basic everyday knowledge of the language as well as learned alphabets. also, in kitchenette program focused on easy meal preparation, bakery items, and Indian pickles.
In Canada, I could teach the same courses as before, or we can put up a devise new schedule as per the college need.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Sana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hing Hindi language and Indian cookery. I have seen that in your last term syllab...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g moreover done bachelors in education. I was a language professor in Canada for ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...or in Canada for 4 years but moved to U.K London in 2010. There I taught the Hind...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... language as well as learned alphabets. also, in kitchenette program focused on easy...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82323232323 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74948400238 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691919191919 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7465889518 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4615384615 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223777588419 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640698323482 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637518013542 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121719559668 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678916262698 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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