You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter
introduce yourself and ask for a loan
say why you need the money
explain how you plan to pay the money back
<p class="MsoNormal">Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Sunil Kumar and I am an information technology consultant, works with a multinational company in Cyber City, Gurgaon. I am an old customer of your Bank and associated with you for quite a long time. Moreover, I have a salary account in your bank with account number '123456789' for the past ten years.
I am writing to apply for an education loan which I need to pay my fees for Master’s degree. Actually, I have decided to study further and applied for the Master’s degree in Analytics at Harvard University, England. I have to pay my course dues by end of this month. I would like to request you to approve my education loan before end of this month to avoid any kind of delay in paying course fees.
Furthermore, I would like to repay loan amount in equal monthly installments over the period of twelve months, and I want your bank to deduct installment directly from my salary account on 1st of every month. However, I am also ready to pay interest amount and loan processing fees in advance.
I am looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Sunil
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88118811881 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50310387464 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9786731376 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263331405016 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100462723164 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751604474065 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111916987085 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771893528485 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.