Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently our planet is facing some serious environmental issues and the scientist community is trying to tackle the Mother Nature’s problems using technology. The big question we have in front us now is whether technology alone will be able to resolve these critical environmental issues or not. I partly agree that technology is the best answer for these global issues, also we need governments and citizens involved whole-heartedly to fix this problems.
We have already witnessed technology playing major part in handling some critical environmental issues successfully. For instance, Electric cars are very effective solution when it comes to controlling the air pollution and helping to reduce the fossil fuel consumption. Another best example is the introduction of hand held digital devices which has done wonders in reduction of paper usage. Previously, millions of trees has to be cut down every year to compensate our paper needs and digital devices helped to bring that number significantly low.
On the other hand, even though technology and science community are trying their best to eradicate the environmental issues. It is not entirely possible until otherwise governments around the globe help and support this cause. Governments must encourage citizens to use the electric vehicles by making them affordable, easily accessible and reliable. Similarly each and every individual should do their parts, like print out papers when it’s absolutely required, avoid plastic covers. Even simple acts like conserving electricity will yield fruitful results.
To conclude, Technology will act as a major tool when it comes to resolving environmental issues. All the humans have responsibility to use those tools intelligently as well as effectively and fix these major global issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 448, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...itizens involved whole-heartedly to fix this problems. We have already witnessed ...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...rdable, easily accessible and reliable. Similarly each and every individual should do the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58909090909 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02966053795 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650909090909 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0505611164 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122589401726 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416054428238 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422162984761 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747118343547 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395678867238 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.