Do you think consumer should avoid over packed product or it is responsibilty of producers?
Surely there has been no time the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals the problems with packed products has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain how use of plastic should be stopped.
To commence with, plastic has been one of the biggest problem in this world. Consuming of plastic has increased and there are less facilities to stop the use of plastic. Plastic pollutes our environment and cause soil pollution. The pollution of soil is decreasing the fertility of soil to grow crops. Most of the plastic we use is plastic bag and also we don't recyle it. People throw plastic bags and these plastic bags never decompose with time.
Probing further, Plastic bags are used every where in whole of the world. For example mc donalds, domminos, K F C and so on uses plastic bag. Price of plastic bags is also included in bills which have to stopped. Also plastic causes many health problems and pollutes the environment.
In conclude, I would say if consuming of plastic will not stop then our future is not successful and the earth will be also known as dead planet. If consumer will not buy plastic products then producers will not sell packed products.
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| 2019-06-20 | Dilpreet singh | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... of plastic has increased and there are less facilities to stop the use of plastic. ...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...astic we use is plastic bag and also we dont recyle it. People throw plastic bags an...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
... Probing further, Plastic bags are used every where in whole of the world. For example mc d...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ncluded in bills which have to stopped. Also plastic causes many health problems and...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arth will be also known as dead planet. If consumer will not buy plastic products ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80530973451 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52153385429 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561946902655 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3599859797 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0689641881897 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279112323978 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532913483513 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053033537986 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505906768318 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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