Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Due to the environmental problems, there are impacts in the weather conditions. Few people believed that generating adaptation capability is a good technique than solving environmental problems. I totally disagree with the statement because ignorance leads us towards the death of the planet. Early prevention of the problems can let the future upcoming to see and live on a healthy planet, as well as the unhealthy environment is a cause of many waterborne and airborne diseases.
First of all, if prevention urged earlier the life expectancy of the earth extends. Getting afraid of the problem and changing our way of living can directly affect humans. Lots of the effect are viable to climate change, the main factor to degrade the climate is the release of unwanted gas like CO2, and oxides from human products. So, early management of the problems makes us comfortable with living. If they are not managed well we may encounter the problems like acid rain, unusual climatic effects (snowing early, discontinuous rain), such problems hinder the way of living. Skipping doesn't gives the solution so, early management of problems can make a happy life.
Secondly, skipping capability cannot give the power to become healthy because of polluted air and water people are suffering from different diseases. So there is a proverb that "prevention is better than care" likewise finding the root cause and eliminating it results to the outcome. In the long run different issues like agricultural products degradation, low crop yield because of more Nitrogen in the soil can reduce crop yield. The childbirth and mortality rate maximizes which is not a good symptom of a healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, jumping and adopting be a quick solution, we cannot resist when maximum. Conserving methods earlier helps to extend the earth life as well as healthy lifestyles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable living'.
Suggestion: comfortable living
...rly management of the problems makes us comfortable with living. If they are not managed well we may en...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...lems hinder the way of living. Skipping doesnt gives the solution so, early management...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
... run different issues like agricultural products degradation, low crop yield because of ...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rth life as well as healthy lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25913621262 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85020791681 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7755013562 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113519849012 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329448321192 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024467897157 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573842038672 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027994281962 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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