I do not have any words to express myself After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Janice,
I am writing this letter to thank you for all the help and time you spend taking care of me when I was seriously injured.
I am finally back to my home after staying at the hospital for 7 days. I will never forget that traumatic accident which almost took my life. A small mistake with my friend changed everything. They say somethings happen for a reason and maybe this was a reason meant to meet you. My mother told me you were the one who brought me to the hospital, after that accident and stayed with me all the time for 2 days when they were unable to track my family.
After all this, I believe that there are some good people left in this world who care about humanity. I would like to invite you to my home for dinner to show a token of appreciation and to meet my family, so we can thank you for everything you did.
Yours Faithfully,
Malik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ter staying at the hospital for 7 days. I will never forget that traumatic accide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26347305389 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20770574252 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5544715318 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196946667812 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764642127278 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694709593072 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161241891113 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042754495853 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.