In some parts of the world, people have became more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?
Residents in some areas of the world have been paying more and more attention to themselves than their societies. this present can lead to many severe problems.
For one, as people are becoming emotionless, they tend to ignore everything which happens around them. there is a host of issues with regard to emotionless. that the people don't care about each other may result in a worse place to settle in. For instance, students going to school study on their own and then turn home without sharing their feelings to parents, adults crossing the street always stare at their smart phone, don't even think about how they can get hurt. neighbors living near by close their doors all the time. The natural human's living form is community. As they separate from the world, they are becoming more stressful than ever. we ignore other people and so do they. In fact, everyone is lonely in modern societies.
however, this problem will be easily solved if we care about others a bit. It is advisable that we get on well with others, including our neighbors and close friends. we can form some long-term relationship in order to improve our communication skills. For example, students can make some friends during their time duration at school. The use of technology can also support us with this aspect of life.
In conclusion, there is a lot of reasons attributed to this situation, and the consequences are considerable. however, if we change our attitudes toward these situations, relationship will take step to be formed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91050583658 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57322915306 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634241245136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4828910144 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1111111111 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2777777778 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31730533008 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080220407627 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704691972579 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182417710366 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933764130349 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.