WRITE A LETTER TO BANK MANAGER TO TELL HIM ABOUT THE SITUATION OF THE BANK AND GIVE HIM SUGGESTIONS.
Dear sir,
I am, John Morrison owned a current account in your bank for more than five years. I am displeased with the services given by your bank as I have to face many problems. Here, I would like to explain in details.
Yesterday, I visit the branch office nearby me in Sirsa city and found the situation extremely disappointed. Regarding staff member, all staff looked reluctant and did not feel duties towards their customers. Moreover, at the front desk, there was no one to resolve the customer enquiries. In addition, not only cashier was very slow at his work but also he is very annoying with the customers which led down the impression of the bank.
Therefore, I would like to suggest a few alterations in the bank so that the customer should feel delighted with your services. firstly, to appoint a public relation officer who should look after the staff and the customers, along with will maintain the goodwill with their customer. Furthermore, there must be extra servants to serve water to their visitors and this will maintain a good reputation of the bank, thus the customer would not think to transfer their account to another bank.
I hope you will take the matter seriously before it is really late.
Yours faithfully,
John Morrison
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...ould feel delighted with your services. firstly, to appoint a public relation officer w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89814814815 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5416287186 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657407407407 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1439874804 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108734090243 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356306874787 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385892060364 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588764845212 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037803303119 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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