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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6710.0 1207.87684729 556% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 338.0 242.827586207 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 19.8520710059 5.00649968141 397% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 18.2735622396 2.71678728327 673% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491124260355 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1691.1 379.143842365 446% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 5.0 1.57093596059 318% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.5024630542 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 582.740669166 50.4703680194 1155% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 838.75 104.977214359 799% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.25 20.9669160288 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0127196650829 0.242375264174 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339636894324 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455329166666 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0097404911086 0.151781067708 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00468122278012 0.0609392437508 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 93.2 12.6369458128 738% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -258.79 53.1260098522 -487% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 28.7 6.54236453202 439% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 59.8 10.9458128079 546% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 98.74 11.5310837438 856% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 55.0591133005 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.3980295567 181% => OK
text_standard: 60.0 10.5123152709 571% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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