The spread of multinational companies and resulting increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that there has been a considerable upsurge in multinational companies, resulting in globalization enhancement which will exert profound impacts upon people in many aspects. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint.
On the one hand, there will be undoubtedly some negative consequences of this trend. In fact, a sharp rise in the number of continental manufacturers lead to a rise in pollution and waste disposed on a daily basis. Furthermore, this can create redundancies or job losses, and even human exploitation, racism of employees coming from less developed countries.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that the benefits of globalization far outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly, an increase in proliferation means that all inhabitants worldwide gain a deeper insight into others. This would avoid prejudices against others in the world and make people become a part of international community. Secondly, a global economy means free trade between countries and in turn, it can strengthen political relationships. For example, companies such as Mc Donald’s, Starbuck can be seen on high streets in most cities as well as commodities from Vans, Adidas, Converse, Nike are considered as products for those who have a passion about shoes in the worldwide. Finally, it creates more job opportunities for people as investment in developing nations are encouraged. Thus, it would link to higher living standards, higher profits and a significant decline in poverty.
In conclusion, although some people claim about the pernicious influences of global companies, I personally reckon that it brings more good than harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45525291829 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22126351459 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68093385214 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4658683668 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2307692308 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108441495549 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310404815973 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292420853436 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575884525626 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439282640407 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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