You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Mrs. Margo
I am writing this letter in connection with the trouble I am facing in continuing the part-time evening course I am pursuing in law. I fear that I may have to opt out of the course due to my hectic daily routine.
I am one of the 30 students from your evening class at Prodigy Institute. I also work as a full-time assistant to a renowned lawyer of the city where I recently got promoted as senior assistant. However, with the promotion in position, I am assigned with extra research work on special cases. In fact, I may have to do extra hours even. With all the increased work responsibilities, I doubt if I will be able to manage the work and be regular at the institute.
Although it may seem difficult, but I am very much keen to pursue this course. So, I request you to provide me the recordings of the daily teachings. I hope you will pay your kind attention to my situation and do the needful.
Yours sincerely,
Amy Schumer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs. Margo I am writing this letter ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rse due to my hectic daily routine. I am one of the 30 students from your ev...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hectic daily routine. I am one of the 30 students from your eve...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our evening class at Prodigy Institute. I also work as a full-time assistant to a...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rk and be regular at the institute. Although it may seem difficult, but I am...
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edful. Yours sincerely, Amy Schumer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50847457627 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74496047428 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.216373864 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215967144424 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683659612443 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530307028593 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136255504615 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590120265899 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.