Violence in media promotes violence in society. what extent do you agree or disagree ?
For the past few decades, along with the incredible development of media, there is a significant rise in the number of criminals and school violence. It is often argued that media is to blame for the incremental seriousness of violence in community. From my point of view, I wholeheartedly agree with this motion and my following essay will clarify the reasons.
At the outset, the widespread coverage of films, TV programs which include violent scenes can exert a negative impact on the cognitive development of children and adolescents. Initially, exposed to crime and brutality, youngsters tend to regard violence as the only resort to address a problem as well as an efficacious way to show their superiority over their peers. As a result, a great number of teenagers have a propensity for violence, which is the main reason for the sharp rise in juvenile delinquency. In addition to that, the obsession with violence is likely to lead to the desensitization of the community. Many people fail to come forward to against injustice due to the phobia of being revenged by means of violence.
Apart from that, social media can be utilized as a platform to provoke violence in the society. Facebook, Whatsapp, etc are used with a motive to mislead youngsters by floating videos of mass killings or spreading religious intolerance and racial discrimination. Furthermore, not only do terrorists use social media to take the propaganda to the masses but also to recruit new fighters along with plan for their attacks. This definitely can have a profound influence on the community and leave long lasting effect on the development of the whole country.
To encapsulate, I totally agree that media plays a role in create a society full of barbarity and cruelty.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, apart from, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04109589041 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9931350114 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4768803634 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165500802538 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058614567012 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632829215214 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098583381863 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219637391832 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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