Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, there is an upsurge in the popularity of online studying when more and more universities have a variety of courses on the Internet. Whereas some people find it a negative development, I whole heartedly believe that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
To commence with, there is no denying that not only is online course attainable for everyone but it also offers a time-saving and cost-effective means of studying. Initially, people of all ages and professions especially those who work full time job definitely are likely to find online courses the most suitable for them. That choosing courses and arranging their studying appropriately to their tough schedule can help them solve the problem of time management more effectively. In addition to that, students have no need to pay a large amount of money to be able to attend online classes on the grounds that contrary to traditional schools, students are not required to pay money on facilities along with other services.
Last but not least, opting for online courses means that students can get access with other modern methods of studying. Conventional schools which chiefly biased on academic achievements and theory but not focus on practical learning can make students lack of crucial skills in work place and find it difficult to seek a job after graduate. In contrast, online courses are carefully designed and monitored not only to commensurate with students’ capacities but also offer them the best ways of grasping knowledge. Besides, in all likelihood, online learners can also make acquaintances with other people from all over the world, which definitely makes an enormous contribution to helping students exchange knowledge and gain deeper understanding along with enhance the capacity to cooperate with others.
To sum up, I strongly agree that online course can exert a positive impact on students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...d professions especially those who work full time job definitely are likely to find onlin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, whereas, in addition, in contrast, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30897009967 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92549394234 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0893619943 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.272727273 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189679010849 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793534172476 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501204661402 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131062970605 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433420343134 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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