You recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter
- Explain why you changed jobs
-Describe tour new job
-tellhim/her your other news
Dear Sam,
I am delighted to share you that I have started my new journey from this past week in a reputed company of our city as a Human resource manager.
You probably do not know that, I was thinking from around 3 months to change my job and finally I got selected in a tourism organisation which is based in Delhi but now opened a branch in Chandigarh. I took this decision to get growth in my professional life, moreover, it is now 5 years that i was working with this only Industry.
Let me tell about my new company, it is in this business since 1945 and are having 2000 employees in all over India. Furthermore, this office is the newest one from them as Chandigarh is having a big market for people who are willing to go for travel and tourism. We are here almost 20 persons appointed to work from here.
Plan for a family gathering this weekend to have a chilling g night out.
Your's Lovingly,
Charlie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... life, moreover, it is now 5 years that i was working with this only Industry. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41279069767 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50598931022 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6526735121 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114290876907 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501890523768 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413825965062 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561325506751 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377634178723 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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