Crime is a big problem in the world. Many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give your opinions.
it is true that crime creates a lot of chaos and damages all over the world. While some people believe that it is impossible to do any prevention against illegal acts, I completely agree that there are certain feasible solutions to it.
Realistic vocational education would be one of the first solutions as this helps young people and adolescents stay focused on career development, and strengthen their intellectual abilities and self-esteem. Besides, after those training services, it is advisable that the government grant practical and direct assistance to enable the graduates to find relevant jobs. Once civilians are able to live on their own with high enough salary to meet their basic needs, they are less likely to commit a crime. For example, for many years, a vocational college near my house has been providing free-of-charge occupational training for adolescents in poor families and helping them seek employment after completing their training courses.
Another remedy to prevent potential criminals is to foster linkages between the police and communities. those connections contribute to tightening up community security as well as precautionary measures against such crimes as robberies, burglaries, homicides and drug deals, etc. Also, these law-enforcing staff should focus on young people who have dropped out of school and those who have released back into society after serving their sentences. this is to make sure they would live as law-abiding citizens. For instance, my friend’s brother, who has just come back home after his seven-year sentence, has recently been supported by the police in charge of his residential area to well reintegrate into the community and embark on a new career.
In conclusion, in order to minimize the risks of ravages that might be caused by crimes, I firmly believe that proactive preventive measures should be carried out in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91052923226 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3376951341 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101212673097 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373452907029 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419190677777 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794885770214 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548207663501 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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