The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?
It is irrefutable that prevention is better than cure. Number of individuals believe that preventive steps are more useful and necessary as compare to treating infections with drugs and state should allocate more budget on this. I completely agree, because it help the nation to prevent the spread of infection to healthy community and cost of treating infections involve huge amount of money.
Blocking infections helps the nation from spreading of infection from one place to other and one individual to another, therefore authorities should have more control on such preliminary steps. Isolating infected individuals from other people can save the lives of others from getting infected. In other words, educating infected individuals to take precautions while dealing others can control the infection to certain limits only. For instance, use of condoms is very common practice initiated by government to prevent the spread of HIV infection from infected individuals while have intercourse.
Cost is another parameter which indicates that prevention should be the primary step for government to control the health problems. Detection of infection and medical treatment involve huge amount of cost to cure the infection and even sometimes patient die because of neglecting symptoms of infections in body. Thus, government must spend more budget in preventive measures as compare to treatment. For instance, Doctors and scientists spend billions of dollars to find out the right medicine for treating patients after patients getting infected. Unfortunately many people because of no cure till the time they can discover effective medicine.
In conclusion, preventive steps are more valuable and effective as compare with medicinal treatments therefore the government should pay more attention to preventive steps by raising more funds on such controls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...on this. I completely agree, because it help the nation to prevent the spread of inf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, thus, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61565836299 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82346161873 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.316238492 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171784310636 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759190379526 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729133492951 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134398419645 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681439566718 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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