In the countries , many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past . Do you think this is a positive or nagative development?

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...ar on choice of people than recent years . I personally believe that this trend ha...
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...e that this trend has both drawbacks and benefits on development nowadays . Ther...
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...ages of the rise in one-person household . The frirst drawback is that they will f...
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...t drawback is that they will feel lonely ,worry and boring because nobody lives i...
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...lood pressure , etc. On the other hand , living alone brings more other benefits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14473684211 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52384384024 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675438596491 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.29688129 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 2.54639175258 1571% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126748350423 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541868923419 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606573648783 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895193302784 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090055061418 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.