Human beings like to copy each other and this is reflected in the popularity of fashion, clothes, and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is observed that people are more attracted to and adapt the latest fashions specially clothing and other accessories or goods, owing to their inclination of aping others. I agree with this view to some extent, as people are conscious about fashion and wish to keep themselves aligned with the modern times. Advertising is another factor contributing to this state of affairs.
Firstly, the huge demand for the latest garments and various other products is an indicator of the nature of humans to do and use what others do. For instance, when iPhone was launched a few years ago, the number of users were low. However, today the number of consumers owning the same, has multiplied several times.
Secondly, people are considered outdated and unsuccessful if they do not dress in the manner that others do and keep up with the times. Therefore, just copying what is in vogue, is the need of the day and we see the rise in aping of fashions and other consumer goods by the populace.
Nevertheless, to a certain degree, the aggressive marketing and advertising of clothes, accessories and other products is also responsible for the rising sales of these products. Seeing the celebrities endorse some particular brand of clothes or car, motivates consumers to obtain the same.
To conclude, the growth in consumerism of fashionable garments as well as products used by people, is a reflection of the inclination of man to emulate each other. Nonetheless, promotion by companies also promotes the popularity of fashion related garments and other goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07782101167 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80351207142 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6959011348 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30946086476 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930804529129 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553262277395 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147051924669 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443987223293 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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