Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Everyone has different dreams about the place where they wish to live. personally, I think it is very desirable to live in a small town. I feel that way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
first of all, small towns offer people more healthy environment that they can live peacefully. Most of the small towns or villages locate in suburban areas which are very close to natural elements such as large green valleys, forests or farm fields. We, as human beings, need to have an intimate relationship with nature itself rather than large cities that full of with intricacies. this is better for us to keep our mind healthy and live happily. For example, about three years ago, I was suffering from depression because of my stressful job. I was trying to ease my emotional condition with psychotic drugs. However, this was not a permanent solution. after a while, with support of my family, I end up with an idea to move to outside from city and I decided to live in a small town which locates in the near of the forest. Soon after, the atmosphere of nature caught my soul and I started to feel better each day. As a result, in a very short time, I recovered and started to live my life happily. I have been living in a small town since back then.
Secondly, living in a small town prevents people from redundant food consumption. Majority of people in cities buy lots of food products more than they need and after a time they throw them away. this is harmful for both our environment, because of increasing amount of plastic package usage, and for their budget that they are paying something that turns into a trash. it is possible for people to produce their own foods in a small town. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I first move to the town it was very difficult for me to find proper food supply. after a while, I decided to plant some vegetable seeds on my backyard, even though it was a very challenging activity for a person like me who is got used to reaching everything whenever she wants. In a very short time, I started to earn my food from the earth. making an effort on food-producing lead me to be more careful about it, so I change my bad habit into reverse, I was not any more wasting but producing it. I have been making my own food for two years, and I have already saved ten times more money than my life in the city.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that living in a small town is more preferable to living in a large city. this is because small towns provide a natural environment to live and because they help us to reduce excessive food wastage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43092783505 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44990277244 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496907216495 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1990406047 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6538461538 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6538461538 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34615384615 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229730709771 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076804079503 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927458269027 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190587443009 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863816549635 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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