You have long been friend with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with him or her?
A friend term explains that sharing things such as problems which about a love, a work etc. And, it gives people many experiences. There are several different types of friendships in communities. Some of these types are about love, some of them are in companies, universities, factories and in other common places. And, some kind of friendships last a long but others not.
First of all, I think the friendship could be a good and it should last many years. For continuing it in strong each member of that situation should effort many behaviours about their relations. If the person has a long been friend with someone they behave each other positively and truthfully. Although, all people have their various features they have to respect anothers.
Also, people in all over the world have their characteristics such like playing computer games, going to cinema or theatre, playing soccer, reading book, watching T.V etc. And, Some parts of people may not like some characteristic which liked by others. For instance, marriage is as like as friendship, and in marriage husbands and wives fell in love. Then, while wives watching television her husband should look with her for their life's health. In these types their members of friendships have to follow rules about it.
In addition, all kind of friendships have a lot of different things and their sharings. They often walk, study, play, going to places where people want to be funny. In these places, they always share their all information. And, these information sometimes secret but sometimes not, and they do not share with others that things.
In my opinion, although there are so many problems in friendships they should last their connections to death. This could be rule and a ritual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ives people many experiences. There are several different types of friendships in communities. So...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e each other positively and truthfully. Although, all people have their various features...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...laying soccer, reading book, watching T.V etc. And, Some parts of people may not ...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endships have to follow rules about it. In addition, all kind of friendships hav...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...lways share their all information. And, these information sometimes secret but sometimes not, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02397260274 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62673465369 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8785458147 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.35 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169559028586 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530141501877 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04980208467 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993997987513 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485641714923 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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