The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy s main office Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two-floor plans illustrate the reorientation of the central office of AAA Accountancy later and earlier.

Overall, The office structure is modernized by eliminating some rooms and expanding others size, and technological equipment and the desks are centralized.

Before, The small entry leads to the narrow front desk with a table and the room east to it are a storage room, payroll office, and manager's office respectively. The meeting room was between the launch room and manager's room, where the accounting office, processing office, new customers office are facing South towards the front desk and manager's room.
The storage room, managers room, and meeting room didn't have a desk, fax, and copier all other rooms except it had those items.

After changes, The entrance gate is expanded and the front desk room is magnified with some sofa and the desks. The launch room, meeting room, and manager's office are at the eastern corner of the floor which is nearly equal in size. Towards the North-West corner, the storage room is shifted and the central part of the office is covered with the desks, fax machine, and copier including some sofa beside the manager's room.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...counting office, processing office, new customers office are facing South towards the fro...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 51, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e room, managers room, and meeting room didnt have a desk, fax, and copier all other ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10824742268 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46704822025 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5631806857 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0575661579216 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403747752268 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635766247489 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538473803235 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746126853124 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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