The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.
The diagrams illustrate the ground floor plans before changing its structure and a proposal for some building work.
Overall, the proposed plan contains some dramatic changes including an extension feature to the living room and doors and walls relocation or complete removing. The storage unit is completely removed in the proposed plan.
According to the proposed design, the living room would be more spacious by removing the internal wall and door by the stairs and adding the hall area to the living room. The stairs will be relocated by the north wall with a new design of a U-form stairs instead of the old ones. With this act, there will be no storage under stairs, but the new stairs take less place than the old ones.
The western wall will keep its location, whereas the door opposite to the northwestern entrance door will be relocated by the southern entrance door. Furthermore, newly designed dual-doors will take the old single door. The kitchen area will remain intact, but its furniture will be completely removed.
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at le 78
- The pictures show the process of making cherry jam Describe the process 100
- The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. And make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word 61
- The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. And make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0289017341 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43354660653 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3035595561 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161060900234 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961591524043 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162190955861 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180994705557 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207988949921 0.0819641961636 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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