Letter: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
〈 Describe the situation
〈 Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
〈 Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am pursuing Ph.D in History and currently residing in a double occupancy room in college hostel with a partner from a musical studies. We both share different interests and our studies requires different way of approach.
I am writing to inform you about the issues that I am facing with this arrangement those are directly impacting my studies in a big way. I am in the final phase of writing my thesis and it requires a lot of focus and research that I prefer doing in quiet environment, whereas my roommate curates his musical notes in the same room when I am studying. I have tried discussing the same with him but he is ready to listen. Because of the noise around, I am not at all able to concentrate on my studies and this is bothering me a lot.
I request you to please accomodate me with a student from my course or preferably give me a single occupancy room. This support of yours will be a great help for me. Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mandeep Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
Dear Sir, I am pursuing Ph.D in History and currently residing in a ...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es in the same room when I am studying. I have tried discussing the same with him...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...be a great help for me. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Mandeep...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48648648649 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61131996602 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5425521955 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173314139803 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671882076428 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527846921315 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116209629192 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318204284893 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.