Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role models for youngsters. Do you agree with this statement?
A matter of considerable controversy at present is famous people like sport person, film star and many more youngster successors are the role model of young generation. we will discuss both, positive as well as negative side in this essay.
To begin with, big achievers are the inspiration of current youth, and they following them everywhere. there are thousand of example to give that the popular people's fan copying their life style. I would like to mention here that, even the cricket world god (named by fans ) i.e. mr. Sachin Tendulkar is inspired by the blasting cricketer Sr. Don Bradman and he has made is their own height in the new cricket across the world and will be lasting it. Another real life experience is mr. Amitabh Bachhan which is formely known as god of actor in film industry of India.
On the other hand, young generation is copying to fabulous person across the globe is fine but they have to maintain the distance, considering the routine gaps between the celebrities and their own life cycle and they have to try to minimize these gaps by acting on it. Millions of crowd is behind the celebrities to copy them feeling themselves that they are also like them without doing any improvement which is consuming there precious and most valuable time which causes fail them in real life.
In conclusion, considering both view we can say that, successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role models for youngsters. which depends on the where you are standing and where is your destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85057471264 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50748647847 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9792671072 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212509061915 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695741344817 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130045504899 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155706386129 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15551589389 0.0609392437508 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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