You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
explain why you changed your previous job
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Frank,
hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
I am writing this mail to share that I have decided to move on to greener pastures on your country. my job application is accepted and my joining is due next month.
The reason why I wish to relocate is due to my health issues. here as you are already aware my shift timings are pathetic I can't even have my daily meals on time. Recently I have noticed some breathing problems as well. As you know I live alone here so in case of emergencies I thought its better if I move to my uncle's. There I even get a chance to meet you as well.
this new job is with a leading investment banking organization named - Credit Suisse and located in Toronto, Ontario Canada. The work timing also suits me its a general shift job 9:00 am to 4:00 pm. the office is also very near to my uncle's place.
The other thing what I wish to share is I'll be visiting your place before moving on to this new journey so let me know about your availability so that I can plan accordingly.
hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Thomas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...on to greener pastures on your country. my job application is accepted and my join...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pted and my joining is due next month. The reason why I wish to relocate is due...
^^^
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...to relocate is due to my health issues. here as you are already aware my shift timin...
^^^^
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y aware my shift timings are pathetic I cant even have my daily meals on time. Recen...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...n get a chance to meet you as well. this new job is with a leading investment ba...
^^^^
Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...o Canada. The work timing also suits me its a general shift job 9:00 am to 4:00 pm....
^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
...ity so that I can plan accordingly. hoping to hear from you soon. Yours Sincere...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32850241546 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33333113201 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7132314037 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246094152294 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825240788032 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748629962067 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125239166354 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756611247708 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.