some people think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe that one can get information from the internet or books. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people tend to think that they should get data or advice from other people. In contrast, others believe that the Internet or books are the best resources. Nowadays, for many people especially adults, Internet is so popular and they prefer to surf the Internet to find their topics. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss about advantages and disadvantages of this topic.
It is certainly obvious, there are many resources in the Internet and people can access the Internet conveniently. From my point of view, Internet is a brisk way to find our question or information. However, the resources in the Internet are not valid all the time and many people always face on the fake essay every day undoubtedly. For instance, we can see a lot of contents about cancer. Unfortunately, most of them are invalid. Therefore, we should aware about what we read and search for our problem deeply.
Turning to the other side of the argument, many people prefer to ask their problems to other people. In one hand, people tend to talk about their experiences and explain their situations. In my view, sometimes it becomes helpful, so it depends on the situation. On the other hand, people try to persuade us that their experience or opinion is absolutely right. Perhaps, it will impact us and we cannot decide correctly. Hence, we should pay attention to their opinion and consider our situation, after that, we can decide eventually.
All in all, despite there are many resources to solve our problems or find required information, people should aware of them and do not rely on all of them. Personally, I usually surf the Internet and study a little about my subject. Then, I try to find someone who has knowledge about my subject and ask about his or her opinion. Eventually, I decide which one is trustable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, then, therefore, for instance, in contrast, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79127725857 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6413183692 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504672897196 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9233877386 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2380952381 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227957302259 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703513399774 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840503272717 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140801780908 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830857016332 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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