Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It has argued by a significant number of individuals that advanced techniques are creating people friendlier. Whereas others do not agree and consider that it is affecting the connectivity among individuals. Before providing a personal view, we will discuss both aspects.
On the one hand, modern technology acts as a platform for people to connect in the easiest way. Communication is necessary in this world and many scientists and engineers are working to improve the connectivity on a global scale so that the world will be treated as a single village. For instance, mobile phones with the support of the internet allow a person to have communication with anyone around the world, better communication always favour strong bonding, thus making more social. Hence, I agree that in today’s world applications like Facebook is vital to have strong bonds between individuals as these platforms help to improve the social network.
On the other hand, addiction to such applications has proven adverse effects by keeping the individual away from society. The overuse of such applications makes their habit of using it every time and force an individual to remain connected with such tools, hence most youngsters utilized their leisure time inside their homes. Outdoor activities are very rear in such cases, hence the government is inspiring people by involving them in outdoor activities like yoga. Research from the University of Chicago has revealed that the impact of modern tools on youngsters are proven severe and making them isolated from society.
In conclusion, although, there are certain drawbacks related to modern techniques and no doubt it is affecting people to some extent. But I still believe that technology is way more beneficial for society in terms of connectivity and making people more social.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29655172414 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84727376544 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.008874802 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197940999821 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705366875203 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545735128846 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128083587153 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596856263484 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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