The Debate of Workplace Surveillance
In today's modern world, there is a strong likelihood that almost everyone is all busy with their work or their family. Therefore, it is necessary for us to keep a healthy living. Exercise is one of the ways that we can do to maintain our health. Quite apart from this, there are also things that are more important to lead a healthy life.
first and foremost, balancing our diet is the first importance. today, a lot of people do not have too much time because they need to work overtime or study at school then with their tutor. Hence, we tend to miss one or even two of their three meals or they just eat junk food to save time. Consequently, there will be some impacts on our health that we cannot predict. If we do not have much time, we should eat vegetables instead of fast food such as apple or banana. it not only helps us to save time but also provides nutrition. Moreover, we should not skip our meals to ensure that we have enough energy for a long day.
In addition, the way we lead our life also contributes to our health. try to stay happy and comfortable as much as we can. For example, we can join a yoga club and practice it every day, or try to read more books instead of using a computer or smartphone every spare time. However, we should avoid anger or anxiety and stay positive which can help us to stay closer to our beloved.
In conclusion, although we are too busy with the daily life, we should remember to love ourselves and care more about our health. we then can feel delight and maybe have a longevity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3321799308 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27030230986 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6766968317 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6470588235 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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