The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The table gives information about the number of visits overseas according to its purpose by the british residents, while the bar graph depicts the countries travelled by these residents in 1994 to 1998.
Overall, most of uk residents travelled abroad mainly to spend holidays while other reason at the least. The number of visits had a significant increase over the period and reached the high on 1998. Of all the countries of visit, western europe was the most popular to the british people.
In details, 15, 246 out of 100,000 uk residents said that their main purpose of travelling overseas was for leisure and fun in 1994, the number continued to increase in 1998 to over one fifth. other reasons of visits were the least which was consist only of 982 uk residents in 1994 and witnessed a minimal rise in 1997 at 1054 before it decreased to by less than 100 people travelling abroad in 1998.
On the other hand, western europe was the favorite destination for the british people at almost 20,000 in 1994 , but a slight decreased in the number was observed the following year. However, the next three years witnessed a steady increase to almost one quarter of 100,000 uk residents. North America was the least likely travelled continent for the british over the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
... to increase in 1998 to over one fifth. other reasons of visits were the least which ...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...sons of visits were the least which was consist only of 982 uk residents in 1994 and wi...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... british people at almost 20,000 in 1994 , but a slight decreased in the number wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86757990868 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4593387541 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525114155251 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7136721527 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.444444444 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176656140971 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825356394454 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474761474638 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111500122289 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460624104637 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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