IELTS Writing Task 1: table
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The given tables represent the statistics of profits generated by sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 5 European countries in both 1999 and 2004. All the number are calculated in millions of euros.
It is apparent that coffee sales in all countries presented increased while only 3 of 5 nations witnessed a rise in terms of bananas sales, the rest sufferred from marginal decline.
Starting at 3 millions in the field of coffee profit in 1999, the figure of Switzerland then doubled to 6 millions of profit. Similarly, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden underwent a slight rise ranging from 0.2 millions to 0.7 millions over the years. However, the most staggering variation occurred in UK when their sales of this produce leapt from 1.5 millions to 20 millions.
Meanwhile, the amounts of money gained by customers' consumption of bananas differed significantly. Switzerland alone was able to make a greater sum of money than the rest added altogether as their sales reached 15 millions in 1999. The figure then soared to an extreme that is even more than 3 times the original sales: 47 millions in 2004. Likewise, both the UK and Sweden demonstrated substantial change with an increase of 4.5 millions and 3.4 millions, respectively. Contrastly, bananas are consumed less in Sweden and Belgium as their sales dropped together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...e figure of Switzerland then doubled to 6 millions of profit. Similarly, Denmark, Belgium and...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in UK when their sales of this produce leapt from 1.5 millions to 20 millions. ...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...anwhile, the amounts of money gained by customers consumption of bananas differed signifi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, similarly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1095890411 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94122062378 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.632438356 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164217919359 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667990437574 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944817870293 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126444194888 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977118576534 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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