More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
At present, people tend to bear a child at a higher age as compared to the past time. There are several reasons for this.
Firstly, in these days, with a rise in demand for more and more skilled workers, people study till a higher age. As a result, the average age of starting employment has also shifted to a further level, and that of marriage has risen to nearly 30 years. Secondly, due to a low salary as compared to the expenses of living, married people consider it wise to save an adequate amount of money before having a child. Finally, young people, nowadays, also have a mindset of staying independent as long as they can, that is without having to bear the responsibility of raising a child.
In my opinion, there are several drawbacks to this practice, which outweigh its advantages. First and foremost, for bearing a child at a higher age, there is a health risk for the mother; she may contract chronic medical conditions such as back pain, body disfigurement etcetera. Also, there is scientific evidence that a mother aged above 30 is at a higher risk of maternal death than a younger one. Furthermore, at an older age, parents are less able to fulfil the emotional and physical needs of their offspring, for example, at the age of, say 34, a mother may not even be able to carry her baby or play with it due to weakness in the body.
In conclusion, although it may seem reasonable to have children at a later age, there are severe drawbacks of this practice for both the parents as well as the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...hild at a higher age as compared to the past time. There are several reasons for this. ...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...s of this practice for both the parents as well as the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56727272727 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57306069153 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1268787966 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.181818182 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221536604485 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837943021255 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474960351302 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144884326565 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353489102688 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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