Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
If no one had ever questioned, we might still have been under the belief that the earth is flat. challenging the things as they are has led humanity to where we are now. Had no one questioned the leaders, we would still have been under the rulership of king.
The world would have been unaware that a vast universe exists, had everyone accepted that the earth is in the center of the universe and that the sun revolves around the earth. Think of all the satellite communication in existence today. Your home entertainment would not have been in the state it is in now without satellite communication. Remote sensing technologies have enabled us to forecast bad weather and natural calamities, saving millions of lives every year.
However, we must not always keep challenging the accepted wisdom but also use the gained wisdom to further progress in all fields known to humanity. The key is to keep up a healthy balance between gaining wisdom and challenging it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Challenging
...nder the belief that the earth is flat. challenging the things as they are has led humanity...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 2235.4752809 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 442.535393258 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83734939759 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66347504 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 215.323595506 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 704.065955056 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.645719013 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2222222222 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0547218992217 0.243740707755 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236304497182 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298772413594 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.033645879647 0.150359130593 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216635133222 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 100.480337079 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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