Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society.
There is a huge gap between members in the families in recent years and it has been widespread in communal activities. People may get familiar with this circumstance due to the enhancement of modern life and they have to cope with new challenges in their life. I believe that it will result in many detrimental effects which weaken the relationship between the youth and older generations.
It goes without saying that there are two principal reasons in this case which have an impact on the communication of generations in the families. Regarding to the globalization, many Asian people attempt to follow the independent personality of westerners and they do not have to take care of their children too much as well as in previous years. Another cause is that based on the appearance of technological advances, teenagers get addicted to video games, social networks and so on. For example, internet only pose a serious threat to children’s health but it also interrupt the connection between parents and their children.
In addition, if members are further apart, it will lead to a lot of impact to the social order. First of all, when parents do not get closer to their children, they cannot help them to handle many problems in their daily life. According to the analysis of many experts, if children have to undergo a dramatic change without parents help, they will be at risk due to the lack of their cognitive abilities. Finally, family affection is essential in many cultures. For instance, keeping the relationship between generations in the family that means people are maintaining the cultural uniqueness of their own families.
To conclude, there is a long distant in the connection between people in families especially in extended family as an inevitable problem. I strongly believe that if people cannot control this significant trend, it will affect the sustainable development of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interrupts'?
Suggestion: interrupts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11746031746 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91661904723 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5614803103 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179032420475 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060075921168 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464305568568 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115387830735 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022480986421 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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